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I am the creator of my own destiny..Am here on earth to enjoy the cream of the creamiest..:))..n Happiness is my birth right..:))..:))..:))..:))..:))..:) Quite a lot of surprises, wierd thoughts, uneasy feelings about things happening around, thoughts about initiating changes, thoughts about making a difference and so on, and on – is the planned agenda of this blog.

Tuesday, December 21, 2010

GOD!!!!!TAKE AWAY LOVE.....no place for it!!!!!!!.

REALLY,dis song comp ells me to pen down my feeling on love.GOD!!!!!!TAKE away love from dis selfish world,OUR mother planet"EARTH"become a tomb."
"NO value of true love".
Love is miracle of" SWEET ART"
Killing care & grief of "HEART"
Little drops of "TRUE TEAR"
A slice of "HAPPINESSES"
Little grains of "CARE"
Might make him "FEARLESS"
if someone pour a "SLICE OF LOVE"
BUT
Through his "divine music"
HE made "Lasting spring"
Fall asleep forever
HOWEVER
Hours,days & years slide soft away
BUT
Grief of heart "REMAIN NEW "ever nd ever
I have "TEAR "in my eyes
THE feel which u gave made me "REALIZE"
That sun too gets set but true LOVE always "RISE"
I looked into your heart your true love never "DIES"

BUT AT LAST.............................................................................
FOR true love,LOVE is only law of life. WHO LOVES,LIVES, who is selfish dying,therefore "LOVE FOR LOVER'S SAKE"because it is the only"LAW OF LIFE".........

"heart touching line"
Tune mere jaana, kabhi nahin jaana, Ishq mera, dard mera haaye Tune mere jaana, kabhi nahin jaana, Ishq mera, dard mera Aashiq tera Bheed mein khoya rehta hai Jaane jahaan Poocho toh itna kehta hai .........
@ NIDHI............

14 comments:

  1. Aa.. aa.. aa Tune mere jaana, kabhi nahin jaana, Ishq mera, dard mera haaye Tune mere jaana, kabhi nahin jaana, Ishq mera, dard mera Aashiq tera Bheed mein khoya rehta hai Jaane jahaan Poocho toh itna kehta hai -

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  2. GOD is to be worshipped as the one beloved, dearer than everything in this and next life.

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  3. very much appreciated...nidhi...keep it up..Keep smiling & Enjoy yourSelf..Take care.

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  4. u did a vry gd job n really heart touching lines...............keep it up :)

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  5. @thnxs rajeev sir nd my loving sis for ur feedback.........

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  6. nice one ..
    really it touche the herat..

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  7. the arrangement of word is excellent...

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  8. beautifully written.... really nice.

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  9. Very nice song & the poem too too good :)

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  10. ur poem never finished,it still continue in my heart.it is UNFORGETTABLE........

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  11. your poetry is a mirror which makes beautiful that which is distorted.

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  12. Dear Nidhi,
    This is only the tip of the Ice berg. You have great potential to write and with that come your inner feelings which make you flow with spontaneity. Love and emotion with pathos are your key areas.
    You can also diversify your thoughts and you will automatically get the lucidity of a writer with a poetic touch.
    We follow leaders...in some ways you are one of your genre. So I am following you in your blog.
    Well done and congrats!!

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  13. @thnxs for ur lovely feedback .i will sure write in other field soon:-))

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