REALLY,dis song comp ells me to pen down my feeling on love.GOD!!!!!!TAKE away love from dis selfish world,OUR mother planet"EARTH"become a tomb."
"NO value of true love".
Love is miracle of" SWEET ART"
Killing care & grief of "HEART"
Little drops of "TRUE TEAR"
A slice of "HAPPINESSES"
Little grains of "CARE"
Might make him "FEARLESS"
if someone pour a "SLICE OF LOVE"
BUT
Through his "divine music"
HE made "Lasting spring"
Fall asleep forever
HOWEVER
Hours,days & years slide soft away
BUT
Grief of heart "REMAIN NEW "ever nd ever
I have "TEAR "in my eyes
THE feel which u gave made me "REALIZE"
That sun too gets set but true LOVE always "RISE"
I looked into your heart your true love never "DIES"
BUT AT LAST.............................................................................
FOR true love,LOVE is only law of life. WHO LOVES,LIVES, who is selfish dying,therefore "LOVE FOR LOVER'S SAKE"because it is the only"LAW OF LIFE".........
"heart touching line"
Tune mere jaana, kabhi nahin jaana, Ishq mera, dard mera haaye Tune mere jaana, kabhi nahin jaana, Ishq mera, dard mera Aashiq tera Bheed mein khoya rehta hai Jaane jahaan Poocho toh itna kehta hai .........
@ NIDHI............
Aa.. aa.. aa Tune mere jaana, kabhi nahin jaana, Ishq mera, dard mera haaye Tune mere jaana, kabhi nahin jaana, Ishq mera, dard mera Aashiq tera Bheed mein khoya rehta hai Jaane jahaan Poocho toh itna kehta hai -
ReplyDeleteGOD is to be worshipped as the one beloved, dearer than everything in this and next life.
ReplyDeletevery much appreciated...nidhi...keep it up..Keep smiling & Enjoy yourSelf..Take care.
ReplyDeleteu did a vry gd job n really heart touching lines...............keep it up :)
ReplyDelete@thnxs rajeev sir nd my loving sis for ur feedback.........
ReplyDeletenice one ..
ReplyDeletereally it touche the herat..
the arrangement of word is excellent...
ReplyDeletebeautifully written.... really nice.
ReplyDeleteVery nice song & the poem too too good :)
ReplyDeleteur poem never finished,it still continue in my heart.it is UNFORGETTABLE........
ReplyDeleteyour poetry is a mirror which makes beautiful that which is distorted.
ReplyDelete@thnxs for ur feedback.......
ReplyDeleteDear Nidhi,
ReplyDeleteThis is only the tip of the Ice berg. You have great potential to write and with that come your inner feelings which make you flow with spontaneity. Love and emotion with pathos are your key areas.
You can also diversify your thoughts and you will automatically get the lucidity of a writer with a poetic touch.
We follow leaders...in some ways you are one of your genre. So I am following you in your blog.
Well done and congrats!!
@thnxs for ur lovely feedback .i will sure write in other field soon:-))
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