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I am the creator of my own destiny..Am here on earth to enjoy the cream of the creamiest..:))..n Happiness is my birth right..:))..:))..:))..:))..:))..:) Quite a lot of surprises, wierd thoughts, uneasy feelings about things happening around, thoughts about initiating changes, thoughts about making a difference and so on, and on – is the planned agenda of this blog.

Friday, December 17, 2010

REALITY...........






A light was in my "eyes"
visiting you.
A voice was in my "ears"
listening you.
A smile was on my "lips"
wishing you.
A glow was on my "face"
thinking you.
A soul was in my "body"
keeping you.
A cold was on my "bed"
but NOW
carrying me not you.................
Posted by at 2:56 AM

10 comments:

  1. NarenderDecember 17, 2010 at 3:51 AM

    beautiful thinking explain with lovely words.

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  2. NarenderDecember 17, 2010 at 3:54 AM

    nothing like this one.its superb..........

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  3. from pen of nidhiDecember 19, 2010 at 2:13 AM

    @thnxs for ur feedback.....

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  4. MadhulikaDecember 19, 2010 at 2:59 AM

    beautifully wrote with beautyfull feeling.....
    awesome...sis........
    Keep It Up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  5. from pen of nidhiDecember 19, 2010 at 3:02 AM

    @thnxs sis:-))

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  6. UnknownDecember 20, 2010 at 6:37 AM

    spontenous nd heart touching lines,i think u hav very good capability to write a poem.wishing

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  7. from pen of nidhiDecember 20, 2010 at 6:13 PM

    @thnxs for ur feedback.

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  8. rex!!!December 24, 2010 at 2:39 AM

    GREAT YAR M UR FAN NOW....

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  9. from pen of nidhiDecember 25, 2010 at 4:24 AM

    its my pleasure:-)))

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  10. JottyDecember 29, 2010 at 12:40 AM

    The picture is unique though surreal and what follows through the 'Pen of Nidhi' is a silent fantasy, caressing the eyes, ears, lips, face and body through each line uttered and each feeling, unuttered. It is only at last that the 'COLD' weans the reader away from the surreal into 'reality'..[it is December !! And it is COLD! So, wear adequate woollens for The New Year (Celebrations) Nidhi. Well written. Awesome....

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